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 The Squirrel

A small red squirrel is climbing a tree. He is a young squirrel. His tail is twitching nervously and his nose is moving quickly. I think he is searching for food. The red squirrel is right now on a long tree branch. He wants to jump to another tree. The squirrel hears something, so he looks down. He is coming down from the tall tree. When he reaches the ground, he runs to a few pieces of chocolate chip cookies. These cookie pieces are lying on the grass. The squirrel is walking toward the food and inspecting it. The squirrel grabs the cookie and stuffs it into his mouth. While he is eating, his tail is moving rapidly. The little red squirrel is now happy.

【Giải thích】: 1. “A small red squirrel climbing a tree” được sửa thành “A small red squirrel is climbing a tree” để tạo thành một câu hoàn chỉnh.

2. “His tail is twitching nervously and his nose is moving quick” được sửa thành “His tail is twitching nervously and his nose is moving quickly” để sử dụng trạng từ đúng.

3. “The squirrel red is right now on a long tree branch” được sửa thành “The red squirrel is right now on a long tree branch” để đảm bảo vị trí của tính từ đúng.

4. “he is coming down from the tree tall” được sửa thành “he is coming down from the tall tree” để đảm bảo vị trí của tính từ đúng.

5. “These cookie pieces lying on the grass” được sửa thành “These cookie pieces are lying on the grass” để tạo thành một câu hoàn chỉnh.

6. “the squirrel is walking toward the food and inspecting it” được sửa thành “The squirrel is walking toward the food and inspecting it” để đảm bảo vị trí của chủ ngữ đúng.

7. “While he is eating his tail is moving rapid” được sửa thành “While he is eating, his tail is moving rapidly” để sử dụng trạng từ đúng và thêm dấu phẩy để tạo thành một câu phức.

8. “The little red squirrel is now happy” không cần chỉnh sửa vì nó đã đúng.

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                                               The Squirrel ing

A small red squirrel is climbing a  tree. He is a young squirrel. His tail is twitching nervously and his nose is moving quickly. I think he is searching for food. The red squirrel is right now on a long tree branch. He wants to jump to another tree. The squirrel hears something, so he looks down. He is coming down from the tall tree. When he reaches the ground, he runs to a few pieces of chocolate chip cookies. These cookie pieces are lying on the grass. The squirrel is walking toward the food and inspecting it. The squirrel grabs the cookie and stuffs it into his mouth. While he is eating, his tail is moving rapidly. The little red squirrel is now happy.

Giải thích hợp lí :

1. “A small red squirrel climbing a tree” được sửa thành “A small red squirrel is climbing a tree” để tạo thành một câu hoàn chỉnh.

2. “His tail is twitching nervously and his nose is moving quick” được sửa thành “His tail is twitching nervously and his nose is moving quickly” để sử dụng trạng từ đúng.

3. “The squirrel red is right now on a long tree branch” được sửa thành “The red squirrel is right now on a long tree branch” để đảm bảo vị trí của tính từ đúng.

4. “he is coming down from the tree tall” được sửa thành “he is coming down from the tall tree” để đảm bảo vị trí của tính từ đúng.

5. “These cookie pieces lying on the grass” được sửa thành “These cookie pieces are lying on the grass” để tạo thành một câu hoàn chỉnh.

6. “the squirrel is walking toward the food and inspecting it” được sửa thành “The squirrel is walking toward the food and inspecting it” để đảm bảo vị trí của chủ ngữ đúng.

7. “While he is eating his tail is moving rapid” được sửa thành “While he is eating, his tail is moving rapidly” để sử dụng trạng từ đúng và thêm dấu phẩy để tạo thành một câu phức.

8. “The little red squirrel is now happy” 

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