*Nowadays, children use electronic devices for entertrainment more than taking part in outdoor activities.Write a paragraph to present your opinion

With increasingly developed and modern life, people's need to use electronic devices is increasing. In particular, most of them are teenage children. They mostly spend their free time just using phones or laptops without paying attention to outdoor sports activities. Partly it is also because parents rarely care about their children, they are too permissive and pamper them too much. Thus, it will greatly affect the physical and mental health of many children. They may become nearsighted, or feel tired and bored when they only use the phone all day. Therefore, I think parents should pay more attention to their children and let them participate in activities. Participating in outdoor activities helps children become more active and healthy.