CHỈNH GIÚP MÌNH LỖI NGỮ PHÁP+ CHÍNH TẢ VỚI Ạ. (BÀI THI NÓI) CÓ VOTE Hello teacher, today I will talk about myself. My name is Thy, Im 13 year old Im studing class 8a1 at Tran Phu secondary school. My hobbies is playing cheese, watching Tv and reading book but my favorite one is playing badminton beacause its good for my healthy. My family has 3 people: dad, me and mum. My dad name is Tung, he is 64 years old and my mum name is Niem she 54 years old, are both a teacher. Beacuse my family very happy so I really love my family. I a lots of frieds but my best friend is Thái she has short back wavy hair with of medium height, she is very kind and cheerful. Thanks for u listening

`1. ` year `-> ` years

gt:

number - years old: số tuổi

`2. ` is `-> ` are

my hobbies là số nhiều `-> ` chuyển thành are

`3. ` its `-> ` it's

gt:

because - clause: bởi vì

`4. ` healthy `-> ` health

good for st: tốt cho cái gì

`5. ` dad `-> ` dad's

chuyển tính từ sở hữu do đằng sau là noun

`6. ` mum `-> ` mum's (tương tự)

`7. ` she `-> ` she is

gt:

trong `1 ` câu phải có động từ chính

S-is/am/are-number-years old

`8. ` my family `-> ` my family is

gt:

Because - clause

`9. ` bỏ so

gt:

vế trước không chỉ nguyên nhân `-> ` không dùng so

`10. ` a `-> ` have

have st: có cái gì

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Sửa:

Hello teacher, today I will talk about myself. My name is Thy, I'm 13 years old I'm studying class 8a1 at Tran Phu secondary school. My hobbies are playing cheese, watching TV and reading books but my favourite one is playing badminton because it's good for my health. My family has 3 people: dad, me and mum. My dad's name is Tung, and he is 64 years old and my mum's name is Niem she is 54 years old, are both a teacher. Because my family is very happy I really love my family. I have lots of friends but my best friend is Thái she has short back wavy hair of medium height, she is very kind and cheerful. Thanks for listening.

year → years

các chữ "I'm" thiếu dấu '

sau hobbies cần phải dùng are ( vì danh từ hobbies chỉ số nhiều)

câu she 54 years old của bạn đã thiếu is => She is 54 years old

câu its good for my healthy , chữ its thiếu dấu '

câu I a lots of frieds , ta có thể dùng a lot of hoặc lots of ( chọn 1trong2 cái) ; frieds thiếu n => friends ; câu này nên viết thành I have a lot of/ lots of friends thì sẽ đúng hơn

trong tiếng anh không được dùng dấu như tiếng việt, ví dụ: Thái (sai) → Thai (đúng)

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